Naflafiwrimo Day 8: First Encounter

This story is actually a retelling in fifty words of something I’ve already written. I thought I’d try it as a kind of writing exercise. I think I prefer the original.

First Encounter

‘My first encounter with the inscrutable power of the divine was finding the face of our Lord Jesus on a grilled cheese sandwich,’ she says. The congregation snigger. They stop as she rises into the air, borne aloft by a thousand screaming souls. ‘My second encounter was rather more impressive…’

 

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